Peer Review 7

For this week, I’ve decided to peer review Sarah Azzopardi‘s blog post Blog 8: Les Murray.

It was very refreshing to read Sarah’s poem inspired by “The Cool Green” by Les Murray. I have very similar views to Sarah, money that was created for an easier means to support of wellbeing and needs has changed to become a curse that is ruling our lives. It affects everything from the products we use to the university we choose.

I love how Sarah has used the three sisters as her background. I would like to suggest her put the picture as a single picture and make her content central. The beautiful three sisters kept distracting me from her content because of beautiful blues and greens in the picture, which could’ve been her intention all along.

Your blog looks lovely, Sarah!  Good luck on the e-portfolio!

Prarthana

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